Chapter 4 - Page 24

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Reply Sol, 02 Sep 2007

I'd like to apologize for one thing. I couldn't for the life of me figure out a way to not waste pages and show Lone's shock that he's been asleep for so long. Sorry :/. He IS surprised, even if he doesn't act like it <.<.

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Reply K.K., 02 Sep 2007

This page sucked. Not hard to draw or anything, but literally as soon as I was done, my computer overheated and deleted the WHOLE thing (I really need to learn to save but I don't do it when I'm so intent...

Also, I can't draw naked guys, they always look like DBZ characters... Lone's not supposed to be anywhere near that muscular methinks

Reply Sol, 03 Sep 2007

Technically he is. He does have incredible strength, after all.

Reply K.K., 08 Sep 2007

Sure, but he's supposedly teen-aged in this scene right?

He's underage, girls. Wait till the time-warp

Reply Sol, 10 Sep 2007

Yeah, but most of our readers ARE teen-aged girls <.<.

User's Comments:

Reply Witch Girl Pilar, 10 Sep 2007

Ya got that right, Sol I AM a teenager. XD

And I must say, Lone looks REALLY hot here. *drools* x3

Reply Sol, 10 Sep 2007

In case people are wondering why he still has bags under his eyes after a week of sleep, it's because of two reasons.

1. It wasn't a very restful sleep.

2. A week of straight sleep isn't enough to catch up on the many many many hours he's lost during this journey. Until now, he's slept only in small, few minute intervals.

Reply Pocket, 10 Sep 2007

sad I'm not a teenaged girl :(

Reply Sol, 10 Sep 2007

hahaha, that comment just made me laugh for some reason XD.

Maybe because it can be interpeted in so many ways.

Reply Death's Subordinate, 11 Sep 2007

Sad I'm not a teenaged girl...not yet a middle aged woman D:

Reply Sol, 11 Sep 2007

*laughs* Oh my.

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