Chapter 4 - Page 30

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Reply Sol, 15 Sep 2007

Splitter begins toying with Lone's emotions by killing the remaining people in front of his very eyes. Now you know what he meant back in the end of Chapter 2.

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Reply K.K., 15 Sep 2007

Sadly, the woman who got burned probably looks more complete than a lot of the other characters, despite her relative minority

I had something else to say, but on second thought, I'd rather not say it.

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Reply Witch Girl Pilar, 24 Sep 2007

EEEK! I hope it's not the mom of that girl. :O

Reply amjam, 24 Sep 2007

YUM. Roasted niblets. (:

Reply Sol, 24 Sep 2007

Believe it or not, but I've started working on writing Part 2 already XD. Part 2 will be 10 chapters in length. I don't know the exact page amount though yet. We'll see.

I feel that the story REALLY starts to pick up in Part 2. Part 1... is kind of weak in plot, I feel. But it sets up everything.

As for Pilar's comment, heh, I'm not going to say.

Reply K.K., 25 Sep 2007

10 parts?! dude.... i can feel the carpal tunnel coming on

Reply Sol, 25 Sep 2007

No, 10 Chapters. And the Chapters probably won't be as long as Chapters 3-5 are.

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