Chapter 4 - Page 34

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Reply Sol, 24 Sep 2007

This isn't what I originally wrote, but I like the perspective here. And in case it wasn't obvious, Splitter went from the top of the building to right in front of Lone in a split second.

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Reply K.K., 25 Sep 2007

Yeah, Sol wrote that he should be pointing the sword at his throat...and when I thought about it for a while, it was going to be a weird drawing to do it like that (difficulty wise and otherwise - it feels like a few pages back when Splitter punches him, that kind of scene again...)

I like this better, and I'm REALLY glad Sol doesn't oppose the change, because I'd hate to change it. Oh, his sword is coming out of the fire (FIRE = SWORD APPEARS!)

User's Comments:

Reply Witch Girl Pilar, 03 Oct 2007

The sword... Is that Lone's? :O

BTW, I agree. Awesome perspective. :D

Reply Sol, 03 Oct 2007

No, that sword is Splitter's, which is pointed right at Lone.

Reply amjam, 03 Oct 2007

I love the perspective *_*...

Still not much to say (I've been quiet lately). Here's to Lone's survival (which I have no doubt he will, or else we won't need a part 2. Still, it'll be interesting to see how he copes with this.)

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