Chapter 5 - Page 17

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Reply Sol, 03 Dec 2007

Dun dun DUUUNNN!

I'd like to think it's pretty obvious what's going on right now. In fact, I'm pretty sure it was obvious a few pages ago too. Even though it won't officially be revealed for a few more pages yet. Amjam for the most part figured it out right away.

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Reply K.K., 03 Dec 2007

I like the pose in the first panel. That's hell to draw though...

I think I've finally gotten coloring his sword down pat... only took like 170 pages~

Reply K.K., 19 Dec 2007

Compressed Pages As a little aside, I have started merging some pages on Sol's storyboard. You know how a lot of his pages seem to be either one or 2 panels? Well, it tends to be because there's a lot of verbiage, but by merging some of the panels, it DOES get a bit cluttered, but we can steamroll through the plot faster. Hope that's okay, cuz both of us want to get to Part 2 ASAP. I hear good things. And really, you can still see the Art behind the words anyways. It's semi-transparent word bubbles... if anybody REALLY REALLY desperately can't see the artwork, then I'll upload the page without text bubbles and you can see it in full glory in a post, okay? Thanx, guys.

As an aside to the aside, my Photoshop crapped out on me and I don't know why. Everything works fine, but all my settings are changed and I don't get what's up... Size of the new document is now in CM instead of Pixels... and the font sizes are in Points instead of Pixels (I'm used to pixels, so this is a bit of an issue) - not that I can't work around it, but it's annoying to have to write "px" at the end of the numbers when I was used to it before... at least the brush sizes are back to normal now, they were fungled up.

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Reply CPD, 19 Dec 2007

So once you're done with the plot are you going to add more panels/page?

Great page by the way. :)

Reply Sol, 19 Dec 2007

I'm afraid I don't quite understand your question.

Reply CPD, 19 Dec 2007

K.K. said, "You know how a lot of his pages seem to be either one or 2 panels? Well, it tends to be because there's a lot of verbiage, but by merging some of the panels, it DOES get a bit cluttered, but we can steamroll through the plot faster. Hope that's okay, cuz both of us want to get to Part 2 ASAP."

I just didn't know if K.K. was saying that there would be more panels in a page in part 2.

I don't care either, way I was just wondering.

Reply Jack14456, 19 Dec 2007

Damnit! I hate that! Cliff-hangers suck! Either way, good job, again.

Reply Sol, 19 Dec 2007

Haha, yes, but cliff hangers make you come back for more.

Also, I think we're only going to be doing more panels for Page 22 onwards to the end of Chapter 5. Mainly because it CAN get a little cluttered. But I will be aiming to try and put more into a page from now on.

Reply K.K., 19 Dec 2007

@ CPD: Not more panels. When Sol writes a storyboard, he lays out how many story items / writing there's going to be. I just started merging them because, as you can tell, sometimes there are pages where not a lot of stuff happens other than a one panel piece with some talking. I'm just hurrying it up a bit to get to Part 2. And Sol is going to put more into panels then so I'll probably stop merging them, but we'll see... right now, I still haven't really gone (or have wanted to go) over 3 panels.

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