Chapter 5 - Page 24

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Reply Sol, 19 Dec 2007

I quite like Shutendoji's personality. It really shines in this Chapter. He can really make you doubt your beliefs, and likes to show people the flip side of the coin.

There is one little thing that I will point out about Shutendoji though. His statement about "our previous lives and our current ones" doesn't really apply to him. It applies to most Demons, but not really to him so much, at least in the "previous life" part. Shutendoji is a true born Demon. Meaning, he was never human. Shutendoji is the son of Raven the Revenger, the first Demon King.

Not really necessary info at this point in time, but just thought I'd share it.

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Reply K.K., 19 Dec 2007

You mean he wasn't the good guy? I kinda think he has a good point, if he's not lying... I don't know either, I don't read ahead of what I'm drawing, so I'm in the dark as much as our faithful reader(s?)

Shutendoji looks good. He's sorta complicated to draw, but there's no denying I like drawing him.

User's Comments:

Reply amjam, 04 Jan 2008

If this were any other webcomic, this page wouldn't have overwhelmed me with speech bubbles, but I have to say I was pleasantly surprised.

Reply K.K., 04 Jan 2008

I don't know what that means, but OK. Reminds me of the webcomic "Errant Story" haha (which I stopped reading cuz the story refused to move)

*Expletive* I had just finished drawing page 31, (took a while) and I decided to crank out another page, which I promptly SAVED OVER the page I had just drawn (and not yet sent...)

Long story short, I need to redraw the page, and now I'm too depressed to draw it, so I'm going to go play Madden...

Reply Sol, 04 Jan 2008

Nothing sucks more than to have to re-do a page you just did. At least, that's what I'd imagine. This is actually the second time this has happened to my artists recently. Orange had to re-draw the most recent page of Goddess Shariah as well. Which was part of the huge delay in getting it up.

In other news, K.K. advises me that Chapter 5 will be reduced from 45 pages in length to 35 pages in length. That's quite a decrease.

Oh, and I'm pretty sure that Amjam was just commenting that she liked how much dialogue was in this page.

Reply warlife, 04 Jan 2008

=)

Reply amjam, 04 Jan 2008

Yeah, it was nice to read a lot, and surprising because TLS rarely has pages that are more than, like, two panels and a speech bubble. Albeit a long speech bubble.

Reply K.K., 04 Jan 2008

SEE?! I said this was a good idea.

Reply Sol, 04 Jan 2008

I never said it wasn't. I've tried to include more content in the pages in Chapter 6 as well.

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