Chapter 6 - Page 11

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Reply Sol, 18 Feb 2008

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Credits for Chapter 6 - Page 11

Lone: Reputator

Stephanie: Cheza


Not much to say about this page. Other than the fact that it's nice that we'll be able to see Stephanie on a regular basis from now on.

Oh, and Lone's name will be officially revealed next page! Look forward to it!

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Reply K.K., 19 Feb 2008

Lone feels like a mental patient.

"Not my cloak... you can't touch it... my preciousssss"

What's "Dangerous" about it? It's not like she's some stranger

Reply Sol, 20 Feb 2008

Lone IS a mental patient XD. He is insane after all.

Believe it or not, he can actually be more insane when his hood is down. It's slightly hard to explain but... it's like an extra shielding that keeps him feeling more secure. If you noticed, when he snapped at Sypher earlier on in the Chapter, his hood was down and he felt like he was being judged. Once he gained a bit more control, he pulled his hood up again, because then people can't look him in the eye. I hope that makes a bit of sense :/. It's pretty complex, but it all has to do with Lone's current mental health.

It might make more sense when how the souls' hauntings work is explained later on in this chapter.

Reply K.K., 21 Feb 2008

I kinda screwed up Stephanie in this page... kind of a bummer, but she looks better in the coming pages, I think.

User's Comments:

Reply jaffar255, 24 Feb 2008

I think she looks fine right here...: D

Can't wait to hear Lone's real name! ^__^

Reply Ccheza, 25 Feb 2008

Hey, =) I decided to make an account on here.

Reply Reputator, 25 Feb 2008

A fluke, huh? I think she looks just as good on this page.

I read my lines too slowly, I think.

Reply K.K., 25 Feb 2008

O__O I'm starting to wonder what ideas of "good" and "bad" are now... T_T she looks weird to me here. And I don't think there's a hint of perfectionism in me saying it...

Well, it's great that you all think it looks good anyways. Brightens up an otherwise lousy day.

Reply Hunterkirizaki, 26 Feb 2008

Greetings, fellow smackbrosian! Name's Hunter, and I love the comic. Read the whole thing, mostly because your character is in Super Smack bros., just like mine.

Reply Sol, 26 Feb 2008

Glad you like it. Haha, yeah, I felt that having my character in Smack Bros. would help advertise the comic a bit.

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