Chapter 8 - Page 5

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Reply Sol, 08 Jun 2008

I could go on for quite awhile with conversations between Kai and Stephanie. I really could. But if I did, the Chapter would be quite boring. I really had to cut out a lot of scenes I was wanting to do in this section of the Chapter.

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Reply K.K., 08 Jun 2008

It's Sypher off screen. Too short.

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Reply Vye Brante, 25 Jun 2008

I understand completely. Short characters seem to easily get ignored . . . Not on purpose though. I know how that goes.

Also know how I could have two characters talk forever but have to cut into it for the sake of readers with short attention spans. It happens.

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