Chapter 8 - Page 9

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Reply Sol, 01 Jul 2008

This page was mainly to remind people that, while it may seem like it, Kai isn't free of the souls. He has to keep a calm state of mind, or they will torture him again. Plus it sets up Stephanie's line here.

Cut Scene #2: I originally had Stephanie slap Kai back to his senses here. An interesting scene, but I removed it because it wasn't significant, and just made the chapter unnecessarily longer.

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Reply K.K., 02 Jul 2008

Rate! Blah, he's so damn whipped.

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Reply Kaitousblackwings, 13 Jul 2008

4 because it all looks great, but it would have been 5 if the lines were a little cleaner. Sorry, K.K. I know these suck up your life like a black hole. ^_^;

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